Charem's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mega G]

So close...

I like this. I really do. The song is one of my favorites -- I love how you kept just liek the original -- and the sound effects add a lot to the overall feel. The lyrics were well-thought-up, too.

I guess my problem is that you don't really put much feeling -- vocally -- into the lyrics, which sort of made the entire thing feel strained and unwilling (if that makes any sense). It's hard to really nail a song, but you did keep the rap going well, so I think you're very close...

I would love to hear more from you, or maybe this piece redone. You are obviously talented. =3 Keep it up, and keep striving for more.

StealthSteve responds:

Yeah I think you're definately right about the delivery part. I thought I'd try to make it sound kinda "robotic" but it just turned out flat in that respect. Too monotone and whatnot.

Thanks for the detailed review dude, I will definately take what you said into consideration for my future projects.

[NightLights]

Dance dance dance!

Okay, this is so going on Stepmania along with that other... ^^ Love it!

Smad responds:

Awesome :P
When I made this song I kept wanting to name it DanceMix or something like that, but decided I wanted sort of original names and not cliche type ones, lol.
Thanks for the good review.

Smad.

[ResistanceIsFutile]

Do the Borg Dance! =D

It's like the Borg accidentally assimilated a large musicial database and it affected their systems...

XD

Can you imagine a bunch of Borgs dancing, with their cold, emotionless expressions? We GOTTA have a video of that...

Well, here's a dancing Borg...
http://youtube.com/watch?v=A8nRKzoISCs

Smad responds:

YES Borg dance LOL!
Isn't stop-cam animation fun? hehe :P
Borgs are always portrayed as being so boring and evil.. I've made them fun, yay!

[JustIs]

Wacky...

Very strange, very good. You need the choir voice...it's fun to play around with, especially for songs. ;3

Smad responds:

Thanks dude, I'll consider doing that. :P

Smad.

[RememberMe]

Where did you get those voices?

They sound familiar... =3 Good song!

Smad responds:

Dance Ejay 6, I have Dance 7 now, but I haven't used it yet. I'm going to try putting my own voice in soon. ;)
Thanks for the review.

[DustStorm]

Piano Rules...

Very ambient, and very dance-able. I'm suggesting a good friend of mine to download it to his Stepmania program on his compy and translate some dance steps to it.

Smad responds:

Lol kewl! Thats awesome.
Thanks for your awesome review..
PIANOS ROCK! :P

[SkyLarking]

Spacey...

It reminds me of a Sonic the Hedgehog-esque sort of song I was working on in the past.

The pad in the background makes it feel old-school...in fact, the song sounds like a Genesis song. Which is cool. <3 I loved that system.

Smad responds:

Thanks for the review.
Yeah I got it into my head that I thought I could make the ABC song kewl.. and it kinda worked.. BUT I found if I took away the lyrics, it was a pretty alright song. Not the best, but alright. Glad you like it.

[RockOn]

Techno Cowboy...

That's totally what it feels like. =3 The first scene was like a good 'ol western shootout...and then somebody draws a laser gun and it all goes nuts from there. XP Fun stuff.

Smad responds:

Yeah I was going for little bit western/rock guitarish... then I just COULDN'T help my self, hehe... What can say? I love synths.
Yeah all in all, not my best song, though.

[Secrets]

A Perfect 10...

...Something I don't normally give. ;3 But this song has quite some beauty to it. Good work.

Smad responds:

Wow I must be special ;) lol.
But I must say, I have to thank the instrument, Piano, for just existing and being so awesome. Thank-you for your kind reviews.

[SpaceJump]

WOAH! O.O

That's skill right there! =D Love it love it love it!

Try adding some piano to your techno. You'd be surprised how well it fits in.

Smad responds:

I love piano... LOL thats why many of my other songs are piano songs. :D
Thanks for your review.
I'm going to try to put together an orchestra type techno/dance song soon..
Wish me luck! :P

BTW, quality of the song here is a little worse than the others cause this one is so long I unfortunately had to lower the bitrate.