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So close...

I like this. I really do. The song is one of my favorites -- I love how you kept just liek the original -- and the sound effects add a lot to the overall feel. The lyrics were well-thought-up, too.

I guess my problem is that you don't really put much feeling -- vocally -- into the lyrics, which sort of made the entire thing feel strained and unwilling (if that makes any sense). It's hard to really nail a song, but you did keep the rap going well, so I think you're very close...

I would love to hear more from you, or maybe this piece redone. You are obviously talented. =3 Keep it up, and keep striving for more.

StealthSteve responds:

Yeah I think you're definately right about the delivery part. I thought I'd try to make it sound kinda "robotic" but it just turned out flat in that respect. Too monotone and whatnot.

Thanks for the detailed review dude, I will definately take what you said into consideration for my future projects.

Dance dance dance!

Okay, this is so going on Stepmania along with that other... ^^ Love it!

Smad responds:

Awesome :P
When I made this song I kept wanting to name it DanceMix or something like that, but decided I wanted sort of original names and not cliche type ones, lol.
Thanks for the good review.

Smad.

Do the Borg Dance! =D

It's like the Borg accidentally assimilated a large musicial database and it affected their systems...

XD

Can you imagine a bunch of Borgs dancing, with their cold, emotionless expressions? We GOTTA have a video of that...

Well, here's a dancing Borg...
http://youtube.com/watch?v=A8nRKzoISCs

Smad responds:

YES Borg dance LOL!
Isn't stop-cam animation fun? hehe :P
Borgs are always portrayed as being so boring and evil.. I've made them fun, yay!

Wacky...

Very strange, very good. You need the choir voice...it's fun to play around with, especially for songs. ;3

Smad responds:

Thanks dude, I'll consider doing that. :P

Smad.

Where did you get those voices?

They sound familiar... =3 Good song!

Smad responds:

Dance Ejay 6, I have Dance 7 now, but I haven't used it yet. I'm going to try putting my own voice in soon. ;)
Thanks for the review.

Piano Rules...

Very ambient, and very dance-able. I'm suggesting a good friend of mine to download it to his Stepmania program on his compy and translate some dance steps to it.

Smad responds:

Lol kewl! Thats awesome.
Thanks for your awesome review..
PIANOS ROCK! :P

Spacey...

It reminds me of a Sonic the Hedgehog-esque sort of song I was working on in the past.

The pad in the background makes it feel old-school...in fact, the song sounds like a Genesis song. Which is cool. <3 I loved that system.

Smad responds:

Thanks for the review.
Yeah I got it into my head that I thought I could make the ABC song kewl.. and it kinda worked.. BUT I found if I took away the lyrics, it was a pretty alright song. Not the best, but alright. Glad you like it.

Techno Cowboy...

That's totally what it feels like. =3 The first scene was like a good 'ol western shootout...and then somebody draws a laser gun and it all goes nuts from there. XP Fun stuff.

Smad responds:

Yeah I was going for little bit western/rock guitarish... then I just COULDN'T help my self, hehe... What can say? I love synths.
Yeah all in all, not my best song, though.

A Perfect 10...

...Something I don't normally give. ;3 But this song has quite some beauty to it. Good work.

Smad responds:

Wow I must be special ;) lol.
But I must say, I have to thank the instrument, Piano, for just existing and being so awesome. Thank-you for your kind reviews.

WOAH! O.O

That's skill right there! =D Love it love it love it!

Try adding some piano to your techno. You'd be surprised how well it fits in.

Smad responds:

I love piano... LOL thats why many of my other songs are piano songs. :D
Thanks for your review.
I'm going to try to put together an orchestra type techno/dance song soon..
Wish me luck! :P

BTW, quality of the song here is a little worse than the others cause this one is so long I unfortunately had to lower the bitrate.

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